By: Kyle Schmit
Hours and hours, miles and miles, it seemed like we would
never find it. The man back and town said if we went straight west, there was
no way we could miss it. Suddenly we were there. It was hidden but obvious,
deep but open. Adventure is always worth it.
I love how artistic this photo and your story are. Somehow you conveyed a much longer journey in just 50 words; it made me feel as though finding the waterfall was a days-long search. Your story is both insightful and triumphant.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that your story is more about the journey than the place in the picture. I strongly agree that the adventure is always worth it.
ReplyDeleteI really like how your story tells of an adventure. It's worth seeking out special places like that. I also love the picture that you chose!
ReplyDeleteI really love your story. Your word choice allows so much to be said in such few words. It has a very deep meaning and is really intriguing.
ReplyDeleteI really relate to your story because I too like to look for hidden treasures and adventures. I also love how detailed your story is even in such a short amount of words.
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