by Dana Lambert
Summer was always my favorite time of year growing up. We used to spend it at my grandma's house. She had this beautiful garden with a little pond and a nearby rock that I liked to sit on. I would often play there with my doll Addie and friend Carson.
This really captures in a few short sentences what it's like to be a child. I like the details you chose to emphasize, that summer was about Grandma's house and a special rock, that the doll receives first billing, before the friend. You encapsulated a series of memories in just 50 words.
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